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The Warrior who cried

Posted by happynuts on 8:09 AM in ,

Here comes the first independent poem from Think factory of H@pPy NuTs. Right from the heart. So kindly bear the mistakes of this NEW BORN POET...








Tears Flowed from the
brownish eyes,
Rolled over the
bearded cheeks,
Slowly fell on the paper
and blurred the letters...

Never have i seen
a warrior crying....
Shattered was his heart...
The heart made of stone.
The hands were trembling,
never was the sword shaken
chopping the enemies...

Never have i seen
a warrior crying...
The man had lost his love...
She had gone forever
Never shall she return...

Never have i seen
a warrior crying...
Conquered in life,
not by war,
but by the eternal love...

Never shall the man be WARRIOR again...






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5 Comments


A "couple" of grammar mistakes here and there. Keep up the good work anyways.


who's the "warrior"? :P


for ur 1st try its pretty good.. cheers


mmmhhh.,, good. but who is the warrior.. :)????

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